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Other Poetry might be a better section. Most people are unfamiliar with prose poems (which is what yours appears to be), and the Other Poetry section is typically where the ...

To be honest, while this isn't bad, it's rather bland. A lot of it has to do with the language, but also with the images. In the case of the ...

If homosexuals were the majority, I bet someone would try to classify heterosexuality as a psychological disorder. And that argument doesn't work for the simple fact that heterosexuality is necessary ...

You may find the Snowflake Method useful for planning things out. Other than that, experimentation and revision are the surest way to find out. You can also post sections in ...

I quite liked this poem for how brief it was, though there are a few things I think could use some tweaking. Right now, the first two lines are a ...

The bamboo does add a nice splash of color in the corner. And I second Mesh wholeheartedly on the post buttons. For the tabs, #77AA00 is one possibility . It ...

I'll hold off commenting on various things until after most everything is finished, but one thing I'd like to suggest is changing the background color. Right now, it's a bit ...

However, it doesn't make sense that truth changes from our perceptions. You say, "What is true for me as a child is not necessarily true for me as an adult." ...

What if the mother was a scientist only days away from curing cancer and no-one else has access to her work but the baby because of her will , but ...

It went from being a place where you could network to get a better job/keep in touch with classmates to a place where everyone and their dog gets on just ...

I noticed a couple of oddities with regards to your firearm descriptions, so I'll be focusing on those. It was a Mosin Nagant M1891/30 PU The first time I saw ...

We were greeted by the whistles of smog. Trains steamed memories into fog I am really not liking the "fog" there. It feels too repetitious with "smog", and it just ...

The two most important things to keep in mind are relevance and activeness. Are the details absolutely necessary to include? And if so, are they somehow directly tied to an ...

It sounds interesting enough.

Some of you may remember this. Most of you won't. And as hilarious as Thirry is in first-person, rather than hop around between persons, this time around, we'll be sticking ...