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Sorm | Training Room B Sorm had just been getting into the swing of things (literally with how enthusiastic Atalanta was with the rag doll upswinging-downswinging-everywheretheswinging routine she had

Thinking that it is dishonorable to question a religion that has this much power is crazy, especially when there's no proof that said religion is true. That wasn't what Cole ...

Sorm | Outside Girls' Dorm Just outside the kitchen window of the girls' dorm, perfectly positioned to admire Atalanta's hearty appetite, sat a suspiciously suspicious non-bush, made more suspiciously

Free, the source you quoted previously isn't very reliable, judging from its treatment of Buddhism. Buddhists have no gods. The closest thing they have to a god is Buddha himself, ...

Sorm About You Please answer a series of questions so we can all get to know you better. Q: Do you identify as a male, a female, or something else? ...

The deliberately mislabeled topics are quite irritating.

Your assuming I don't feel pity No. I only pointed out that if I had said to you straight-out "I pity your inability to feel sympathy for those unlike you" ...

There are novel and collection markets that accept unagented submissions, if you know where to look, and some of those markets only accept unagented submissions. That's the thing, though. You ...

YES. It shows them that you're already selling, which is always good, and gives you a leg up over people who have never published anything before.

It would be helpful to actually point out the holes in the logic. I personally see no holes in it, and fail to see how it can be considered silly. ...

Anyway I guess my SW story is more of a canon really? No. Canon is anything that the creator(s) has written or made known about a fictional universe. Fanfiction by ...

I have no clue what proof the wine is, nor the brand, nor the brand of grape juice. I'd imagine they are cheapo and low-proof (don't want people getting tipsy, ...

If it was the snowflake technique, you can find it here:

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It's really not that bad in that example. "The" is one of those so common, you don't notice them words (kind of like "said"), and I actually didn't notice all ...