Kakburken

Here's one of mine that needs reviews. I´m not sensitive so please be mean. :)

Thank you for your comment. As for commas, you might be right. I actually didn't think of those little buggers at all. Perhaps they would make the poem easier to ...

Welcome my fellow Scandinavian. I live just across Öresund in Sweden. Nice to see another viking find their way here - soon we'll be enough for some old-school pillaging and ...

The merciless flow once again brings on the ebb. Kindles anew, that brooding inner glow. Lights a flame that's wan over blurry visions fall. Perturbs the wound, of time eluding ...

By thirtyone I hope to have at least one book published but realistically I think it'll be hard to find the time to write. Me and my girlfriend's first child ...

Green

The book is very different from the movie. First of all, the gore is tenfold worse. Really, the movie is nothing compared to it. I really like American Psycho since ...

I haven't read that many strange books but I'd have to say Der Process, by Franz Kafka. I read it years ago and was probably too young and unmotivated to ...

I liked the feeling of this piece. The main character is believable, filled with sad obsession, refusing to relinquish his hope of getting her back. I loved the way you ...

I thought it was ridiculous. There were too much flaws to see past, like when he threw the metallic dust to find the box and the arbitrary magnetism which seemed ...

You're describing chaos and confusion within, an agreeable topic if ever there was one. However, it rings a little hollow in my ears. You've painted the outline, but haven't filled ...

ultimate

Known for being one of the few sword-digging girls on the internet?

This is the story of a young man, or boy He grew up in a home with a family, lacking joy No one was mean or cruel they treated him ...

The first time I read this it didn't quite capture me. Probably because you're trying to tell a story of a henious murder without a background story to build up ...