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"The smell transmitted uneasiness, and made passers-by hurry about their business wondering why they suddenly felt a profound sadness." I liked this part except for the "passers-by" part, it confused ...

Claire looked out upon the empty sea with a longing in her heart. She imagined the long, rolling pastures of her homeland back in Europe. She squeezed her eyes tightly ...

Awsome! I have read through all of the warriors books. Fire and Ice has that suspense though! Purple is a GREAT color. (in my opinion.)

Thank you for the advise! (not that it was advise, lol)

Thanks! 1.Historical fiction (it is supposeed to be suspensful) 2.Bible also (respect God) Warriors: Fire and Ice 3.Purple Hey thanks for replying.

Hi, I'm just here to write, I've been searching around to find a website to post my ideas and get critique from real people.