Kakali

Claire groaned as she slowly awoke from her unpleasant slumber. She felt a harsh throbbing in her back from sleeping on the ground in a cold, makeshift hut. She stretched ...

They had tried to give me away. Again. (Between away and again should be a comma.) Handed over to another family. Whether they had kids, dogs, senile grandparents, expensive furniture, ...

Like everyone else, this is a script. A good one at that. Twards the end they all say "Bye" and that confused me. try using a word other than bye, ...

Hey! I was really excited to read your new chapter. I scribbled in my diary, writing about the cold and of my modeling for Monsieur Degas. "I scribbled in my ...

This is all great information for me, and I plan to fix it later on this thread. Before I revise it though, could somone tell me if the very end ...

Simply wonderful, I loved it. The story was great! A little nit-picking. The lights dimmed in the Palace Garner Opera house, all the talking from the gentlemen and high class ...

Welcome to YWS, Ballerina, nice to meet you, please feel free to PM me anytime. Call me li-li (lee-lee) You will love it here, we're all pretty crazy, and some ...

I really like it. Acctually I can't tell if you drew this or not. Wait did you dra it, or did you take a photo? *=* I'm a bit confused. ...

I've read the Animal Arc books. Thanks for the good selection. I hope you will find my books interesting as well, please PM me if you ever get the chance ...

I re-wrote chapter one, so if you would......?

I be nice, uh like sorta nice. Singer: Really? Kakali: Yes. Singer: You promise? Kakali: Yes, I promise to be super-oober nice and to cherish you and give you chocolate ...

Okay, here, I will give you one good book/series title that I have read, and you can give me one. I'm just looking for something to read! For those ho ...

Hola, Luna! Welcome to YWS. As meep said, everyone ha already told you the rules. What exactly were you planning to write, the genre. I am writing Historical fiction right ...

Hey, cchar! we're already freinds, but Welcome anyways! This website is really cool, I just joined myself a couple days ago.

And slowly, And slowly, My eyes close. Two and slowlies' doesn't make sense, try: "And slowly, So slowly, My eyes close." Are this tears coming out of my eyes? It ...