Kakali

Banned because you said Brit!

MAHFACE!.jpg What is that on top of my head you ask? HARBOW!.jpg A HHHHHHAAAAAIIIIRRRRBOOOOOWWWW! (a badly done hair bow) So, here's one more ugly pictures of meh face. WARNING! This ...

I want! I can't promise a winning entry, but I sure can try!

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Think to himself, "This guy is really wierd." and try his best to ignore him, until one of his friends really does die. Then he would basically just wreck everything ...

Uhm, if you have the time, I could use a nit-picker for my novel I have been working on. Please and thanks! If I get the chance to see one ...

Bullet? No problem, I mean, its not like I have any attachments to anything other than Serenity, and even then, its not mutual. If things can't go back to the ...

While at my eighth funeral today, I looked over and saw the Progressive Insurance Messenger He is actually married to someone I know! Who knew, right? I just thought I'd ...

>:-( I feel very conflicted right now.

Would you please review the first chapter of my novel, I would like to make it more enjoyable to read. :)

I gasp from the unexpected shrike. I don't know what a shrike is! Shriek maybe? Heh heh, Meko, aka my little momma’s boy. Thats the second time you used "aka", ...

Hey iCarly!! I'm here like you asked! Good story, just a few things. Slowly, Altair approached his victim with ease. The crowd was cheering. Chanting… I don't think chanting should ...

This is Chapter One of World Apart. Critiques are welcome!! This is my first serious novel. Please tear it up!! ______________________________________________________________________________________ C

I liked it, and it totally made sense. I love how in depth it was. Here are a few nitpicks. Desperate to please the Mirror You bury yourself under liquid ...

*Claps* beautiful! Just one thing: "And here I must stay" Darn, and here I thought I had the pattern figured out. I liked the pattern, which was what I was ...