Kairii

I absolutely love this, darling! Great job! Very well written.

Thanks for the constructive criticism but this was intended to be a song from the beginning. The repeating stanza to which you referred is the chorus. Thank you very much ...

I would probably classify it under "emo" rock. Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it!

This was really really good. I like how you incorporated the thunderstorm and how you had her confess only at the very end. I really like your writing style. Very ...