Kairii

First off, I love the poem, it's wonderful. You have a gorgeous writing style, and you conveyed a very powerful and touching story. I really have to applaud you on ...

Rated for dark themes. This is my first time posting on the site in forever. I hope you guys like it. My End The sun shifts its position in the ...

I absolutely love this, darling! Great job! Very well written.

You said we were forever Best friends till the end And then cut me with your words Again and again and again. And you expect me To sit and take ...

Thanks for the constructive criticism but this was intended to be a song from the beginning. The repeating stanza to which you referred is the chorus. Thank you very much ...

Through the looking glass And up the stairs, You check again But no one's there. You're staring straight But you don't see The little girl that once was me. I'm ...

This is really good. I like how you used a lot of descriptions but also levelled it out so that there weren't to many. I also liked how you kept ...

Very very good job on this. Your characters are still just as lovable and real (Well, as real as a unicorn can be) as always. However, watch your transitions again. ...

This is really good. I love how she's like a normal girl instead of some mystical, enchanted, god-mod character. She's so easy to relate to and find yourself loving. You ...

I would probably classify it under "emo" rock. Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it!

This was really really good. I like how you incorporated the thunderstorm and how you had her confess only at the very end. I really like your writing style. Very ...

Yay! Thanks! You guys are all really nice!

Raindrops kiss the top of her head You wish you were dead You know this should end Because this is where you screwed up again You've lost her again You'll ...

Hi guys. I go by Kairii (my name in Japanese, so I'll give you a non-existent cookie if you can figure out my real name from that), I'm almost sixteen, ...