KaiTheGreater

Wait a minute... in this little apostasy of yours, what happens to poor Rosie? Is she left to suffer from heartbreak and despair all by herself...? D:

But still, why can't ANYONE just be FRIENDS anymore? There really is more to life than romance, you know... I'm not ranting against gay, by the way. I'm just tired ...

Although I suppose it's really my fault for reading it....

You just ruined a perfectly good book series for me... ;_; Why would Sam marry Rosie if he was really in love with Frodo? Why would he even pretend to ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you! :)

Lumi also mentioned the lack of imagery, so I'm considering writing a second (greatly altered) version.

Thanks for reviewing! I'm terrible with rhythm, everyone keeps pointing it out but I don't know what to do about it. :/ Many of the "metaphors" you readers keep seeing ...

Thanks for reviewing. I'm not very good with rhythm, so I don't know how to fix that part. :/

Also, I didn't want to scare anyone by getting too detailed. The idea behind this poem is that I'm hiding things that are too terrible for anyone to understand, and ...

Thanks for pointing all that out. In my mind, the screams, images, and burning sensation are all literal, but now I see how they could be perceived as metaphors And ...

Thanks! I'll try to do what you suggested. :)

I didn't mean they should be guilty that they're depressed, but that they won't even try to get better or help others. But I see your point, I guess I ...

About halfway through, I started running out of words to rhyme without saying something like, "Life will get better, I have a kitten, want to pet her?" So I was ...

Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!