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Re: Where The Music Is
I haven't read a better story on the whole of the YWS website. I'm new here so I haven't read many but my gosh, this is AMAZZZZINNNGGG!! ;) I agree ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
Um Heey.. Im new here. How do I get friends.. How do I ask people to be my friend. What are points?! Thx please reply soon. From kakgirl who is ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: A Friendship Worth Saving
Hey.. I really enjoyed reading your story. :) I only have one problem. I mean when 'Chauncey' asked her if they wanted to date, in my opinion that's unrealistic. He ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: What happoned to 'You and Me'?
Heeyy.. I like your Story/Poem it was interesting. One thing,in my opinion it needs a little more depth. Maybe I'm wrong but there is nothing in your story/poem to express ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Paralysed
Heey guyss.. I am not @ home so I only had a short time to write. I added another little piece and will add more soon-When I get more time... ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: Paralysed
Hey.. Thanks for all the reviews-I'd loveee some more!! :D I've made some nesscesry changes, and continued the story a little (I'm struggling for time.. :D ) Haha Thanks for ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Romance scene.
So uh about your story, do you want my opinion? Here goes :D I think it should have a lot more detail! Its a romance scene. Make it... goey!! lol ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Say That You Love Me
Heya :D I love your story. You have really advanced punctuation and grammer, and I can't mention any other mistakes then the ones already made,there really are not that many! ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Say That You Love Me
Heya :D I love your story. You have really advanced punctuation and grammer, and I can't mention any other mistakes then the ones already made,there really are not that many! ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Paralysed
I try to pull her back; I pull hard on the reins but she is not responding. By now I am almost tasting the fear rising through me. We are ...
Jul 8, 2010
