Kagi

My first Romantic story. Hope its ok.. Review please!! Kakagirl X X

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Good story and a good healthy read for anyone who loves reading. However I have some nitpicks with your story.. First, I don't think it should be in Romantic short ...

Okay.. This story was well written, it had excellent structure and to be honest, I really really loved it. It is a perfect romantic short story. I enjoyed your characters ...

Haallo.. I luved this poem.. It made me gigglee.. Tee heee heee.. I wish I could write a poem about something as boring as a couch and make it actually ...

Whimer.. I like August?! OKay.. This story scared me.. Really scared me.. August can't be that bad. I liked your writing though.. I want to read another one of your ...

Okay.. This.. was..um interesting? I don't really know.. I mean I didn't really feel your story.. I'm not sixteen but it all felt the same you know?! Most teens in ...

Just before I say anything else.. PLEASE FINISH THIS.. IM DYING TO READ MORE!! :D So.. The only thing along with the others is that teen court isn't very realistic ...

To be honest.. I felt that this story.. was GOOD!!! But could be better.. :P I mean.. its in romantic short stories.. So we need a little more romancce-get me?! ...

Okay.. I liked, no I really did! It has a few bits I didn't like though. A story is supposed to be a telling/a happening. Like, telling what happened to ...

You've seriously ONLY beguun writing???!! This was just so amazing! FAB-U-LOUS!! I too, normally kind of don't bother reading long stories but yours just.. PULLED ME RIGHT IN! I couldn't ...

Woah! This should not be in other!! IN should be where it belong-IN short stories!! ITS FAB-U-LOUS! Good work.. Kakagilr X X

I thought it was good but didn't really feel the title of the story fitted the actually story! It should have been Lost or I don't know Dessert.. Aas far ...

I liked it. I understand what you are saying.. Keep writing.. Kakagirl XX

Hey People! Don't be so hard on her! I agree it is a bit hard to understand, but I'm sure that Hannah knows what she is trying to get through ...