Kagi

This story was deleted due to problems caused by comments. Ill post it under a different name soom.

---Sadness is welling up--- Wow! YOu sure know how to write about emtion. Your ending was perfect and your description was perfect. I wouldn't put too many of threethreethree words ...

Woah.. There's a writer in the house! :) I really liked this! I have absolutely NOTHING WRONG WITH IT! I only think that MOST stories always end kind of happy ...

Kieran held Charlotte delicately in his strong arms, his heart beating as hard as hers as they kissed. Six years and they had gone with only a few minor fights ...

Day One, I had gone to camp for the past three years, so the first day I saw you that year, I didn't think anything of it. You were pastors ...

Day One, I had gone to camp for the past three years, so the first day I saw you that year, I didn't think anything of it. You were pastors ...

Enjoyed the story and the charchters. Above all I felt this was quite blunt. I can realate to it tho-I mean you see the guy,the guy with the smirk,with the ...

Wow! Now that I have stopped reading this I actually realise that no,I'm not watching that all happen but yeah,I'm still here at my computer. Seriously-I have no clue what ...

OKay.. I agree! This is soooooooooooooo not romance. It should be in Death curdling scariness!! I'm terrifed-Gunna have nightmares. You really need to edit this. My hands thightened thier grip, ...

OKay thank you guys.. I'll keep writing. Ill edit again soon when I have the time-LOL writing is a step by step thing right?! Yeah so I'll take all the ...

Well I edited it.. So is it better.. Need advice.. Where are nice people when I need them!? Tee hee hee only kidding guys.. X X :D

She is beautiful. Her pale green eyes full of passion every time she kissed him. Her light brown hair tied into an elegant plait , strands falling into front of ...

This was just about as good as it gets.. I'm mad about your story! I don't have anythign to nitpick out of your story. It was quirk-less. You are a ...

Okay.. I'm going to be honest.. I didn't really liked. I felt that it was rushed.. I felt that it didn't have enough description and I didn't like how the ...

Okay uh thanks for the Advice.. I really don't wanna add on to this story,I mean make it longer.. I feel that if I wrote longer that, it would destroy ...