Kagi

"Wanna go to a movie?" he had asked shyly. "Sure," I had replied. Had I just been asked to go out on a date ? And not just with any ...

Okay thanks guys. I made some changes (AGAIN!! :D) Anyway, I think I'm done with this story the end has happened.. You know TIME TO MOVE ON PEOPLE!! Haha.. but ...

Remind me why this is in the romance section?! :D It was good and exciting ( and disturbing ) But not romance material!! Review over it and maybe add in ...

Okay..this had a good plot but to be honest I didn't feel the story enough.. I needed more inside emotion from the charchters..whether you were truly happy or was there ...

Thanks guys these rewievs helped. Ill write more soon. Kaka

Woah,swell story! You got great talent and they story lacks nothing! I'm really impressed.. The detail was great and very moving. I felt as though I was there. You know, ...

My hands and legs ached from the effort of hauling the water from well to well.. Occasionally I peered over my shoulder at Moya, my younger sister, who had been ...

Thanks for the comments.

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Woah... Speechless,have nothing else to say.. Does that in any way explain what a talent you have?! I wrote a story,my first romantic story, and I got a lot of ...

You know what sorry guys! But brontobeawriter, I didn't threaten not to write anymore,and you made me sound a whole lot worse! I deleted that comment,Just to suite you! I ...

Yeah I agree.. WOW! Haha.. you have a talent and I'd really love to read more. Your title was really catchy and drawing . It sucked me in.. :D Your ...

Kay..edited Ethans part and er added on some more. NO likes yet tho. :( Romance must not be my thing. Kaka

Thanks guys.. I don't think Romance is my thing! :D :D Oh well

Heey.. If I get enough Likes and reviews I'll continue this..I'm not sure its up to stantard!! :D I mean its my first Romantic story so I need to know ...