Kagi

Wow.. I really liked this. Great work. Kept me reading kaka

Hi! Im kaka and I'm goin to review or critque your work today. Your poem was so immense! The title caught my eye and immediatly drew me in. That is ...

Lee This has been going on for weeks! Where is this going,If anywhere? His smirk infuriates me. The way he laughs and teases me, gets to me like..like I've never ...

This was incredibly heartfelt and I felt every single word in your story. Your words were placed perfectly and well thought out. The structure of your story was delicate and ...

This was too confusing to really be able to critque you're work today. I know this category is called short stories but I don't think this stroy suits this length! ...

Please write more.. It's well written and easy to read. The characters are interesting and unique well worth pursuing. Please pm me when u write more. Continue to work on ...

Thanks for reviewing anyway guys.. This is my first ever poem! I'll kelp workin on it!! Thanks kaka x

Well done first of all I really enjoyed your writing! You are obviously very practised becaus eyour writing is quite formal. It sounds like you are actually writing a diary ...

This is a fantastic poem well written with a sense of lonliness. You can sense the kids wonderment.. why isn't Daddy looking at me?! Very well written and to be ...

Wowsa.. Get out the camera's guys-this book is film worthy! Haah x No really this peice is super-and its only your first!? I loved it. How you flaunted yourself at ...

Well miss violet. Kaka will be the critque of your writing today. .... .... Speechless! Utterly speechless! You are only the same age as me and you can write like ...

Its kaka here!! As been said before-Sometimes little is better. And this time, that saying just sums up your story. It was interesting and drawing. I was completely un-aware everyday ...

*Edited Version* There she is His golden girl The one, my crush is holding She twists her hair and lets him know she's got no better place to go. He ...

So the names kaka. Kaka will review your peice today. I can be quite harsh but please don't take it all on board. Well I mean do. But like not ...

So, I'm kind of hyped up on cough drops and Red Bull. I wrote this in a fit of spastic inspiration and don't be surprised if it makes the list ...