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Re: Life
Kay thanks!! I know I have barely any reviews but thanks anyway.. I really appreciated your review but I'd like to point oh (nicely :D ) Thant I kind of ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Life
There you sat, knees tucked to your chest, with your book in hand and your glasses sitting rigid on your face. Your eyes smiled when you read the good parts ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Caught in the Waves
Hey its Kakagirl here to review, I must say I found your story really moving. It was quite unique in the fact that I haven't seen many infact any write ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Mixed (edit #4)
THIS IS SO GOOD. IT IS FANTASTIC. SO MOVING AND TOUCHING. YOU HAVE RAW TALENT. THIS STORY IS FIT FOR BOOKSHOPS. KEEP WRITING NO MATTER WHAT. CAN'T WAIT TO READ ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Traveler (Updated! 12/30/2010)
Absolutly loved your story. It was well written and they stroyline was fantastic. I love cecil. Don't like the name but I love him. I can't wait to read more. ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Definition of Love
Im kaka and I am going to reveiw for you today. :D I felt like I had just been shot. The world shattered around me as I read her lips ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Definition of Love
Im kaka and I am going to reveiw for you today. :D I felt like I had just been shot. The world shattered around me as I read her lips ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Definition of Love
Im kaka and I am going to reveiw for you today. :D I felt like I had just been shot. The world shattered around me as I read her lips ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: I Was One Of Them
*Here on request* Well.When I reviewed this one and I thought, "Oh no, another piece thatis going to put my good work to shame." You have a serious talent. I ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: The road not taken. *Edited*
Hope you like this guys. My first ever fantasy story. Kaka x
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: The road not taken. *Edited*
This story was developed from the poem 'The Road not taken' by Robert Frost. It's not on of my best pieces, I admit but, I'd love some reviews to help ...
Nov 6, 2010 -
Re: Canvas of Memories
Wow.. This was extremely well written and for calling it sloppy was just unreal. I never read such an intreiguing story since my time here. It kept me reading and ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Chains.
I enjoyed writing this guys.. Should I write more.. I'm not sure if it has a good enough ending.. Thanks guys.. Kaka
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 1 (Draft #2)
Heey.. Here to review.. Corections in red. I was eating a big chocolate ice cream, and feeling the water splashing from the white fountain of one of the most beautiful ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Hurting.
Thanks for reviewing. Helped me and I made the changes. I'll write more soon. Kaka xx
Nov 2, 2010
