Kagi

Not after everything we'd shared. Chapt 2: Nobody said it was easy but no one told me it was this hard. I woke up feeling confident and ready to face ...

Great story! I love this-very well written. I loved the last line! It was fantastic and Let me just say instead of Boy this is going to be a hard ...

If you spent most of your life with a person, wouldn't it cross your mind that he could be the one you would marry? If you grew up with that ...

Great story, a good few grammitical errors but seems to be covered by fellow critques. Your description was excellent and I loved your word choice in some parts. Overall it ...

Thanks everyone!? Your reveiws helped Kaka x

Hey it's kaka here... Gr8 story well written and thoroughly enjoyed. I love your choice of words and your plot was excellent. Great piece well done Kaka x

Wow this poem really flowed quite well. It had momentum. I really enjoyed reading it, it had rythme and your word choic was excellent. I had no nit picks it ...

You might want to re-think this. It was almost like a PM not a story. Keep working on it kaka

Well done, you really know how to capture a scene, maybe write another chapter bout what led her to her sucide. I would love to read more-you got talent!! Keep ...

Hey Kaka here to reveiw.. Well I liked you story. It was descriptive but it didn't really bring me anywhere. I felt exactly as an onlooker. Like I was just ...

Ok.. I'm kind of in a pot hole with this story :( Inspiration!!! Anyhow thanks.. Kaka x

Thank you very much everyone! I like writing it!! Aprreciated.. *Hugs* Kaka x

"No get off me! Leave me alone... Darren you messed up not me, there is nothing left between us if there ever was anything.." I hissed hatred making my eyes ...

Wow, I have to say this is one of my favorite pieces. Its fantastic I've never read something like this and I think I'd have to disagree with sweetmoments; it's ...

There you sat, knees tucked to your chest, with your book in hand and your glasses sitting rigid on your face. Your eyes smiled when you read the good parts ...