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Re: Dine at the 'Review Restaurant' [OPEN]
Done.
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
Ok Jash. I'm so sorry that this has taken me forever. I bet your kind of sick of me saying this at this stage huh? Well I'm sorry. *There I ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: What I Am
Hey, This is an amazing poem. Really heartfelt and unique. I've never read anything quite like it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word. You have serious talent. I can't put ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Zee Poetic Side Of Life
Hey anger. ;) How are you? Hows the wii fit going? *Laughs* Sorry that this review has to be short, I have about 2 milliminutes left on the laptop so ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: feelings
Hey, I'm not really bothered to review your grammar, (Sorry) I didn't see anything major or minor for that matter, grammar wise. ;) At first when I looked at this, ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Clueless
Hey Dudette, This is an epic story. I really like it. Your ending was amazing. Anyhow before I start commenting on your brilliance, I'll start with grammar. Here goes; Red ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Dine at the 'Review Restaurant' [OPEN]
Done! Anyone else? I don't bite?
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Jerabeth, Chapter 1: 2 thousand years later.
Hey pen, here again. You have loads of hefty reviews that have pointed out your grammar mistakes so I won't point them out again, if you don't mind. Ok this ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Jerahbeth: preface
Ok pen. I'll try heave my weary brain to review this for you but don't say I didn't warn you. Fantasy is not my thing. At all. I'll start with ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: My Love Rip My Heart Out
Kakagirl here to review for you. I didn't see any errors so your lucky. You must have edited well. Your pace throughout the poem was really good, not slow but ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Losing You
Hey. I'll review for you today. All in all this was well edited, I only found one real error in grammar. If I hadn't pf fallen for your beautiful hazel ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Dine at the 'Review Restaurant' [OPEN]
Welcome to the 'Review Restaurant' Good morning/afternoon/evening! Let me guide you to table number 7 where I shall take your order. So, reviews huh? I'm sure I can do you ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: How Steve met his wife
Hey. I'll review for you today. First of all, there is a lot of editing that needs to be done here. There were a lot of tiny typos that popped ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Charlie and Logan- Chapter 5
Luxy I'm about to scream at you. Why did you have to end there? Why? I need more MORE! If you dare take as long making the next chapter Ill ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: Charlie and Logan- Chapter 5
Luxy I'm about to scream at you. Why did you have to end there? Why? I need more MORE! If you dare take as long making the next chapter Ill ...
Jan 31, 2011