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Re: First Person Multiple
Faulkner did it! In As I Lay Dying, The Sound and the Fury, and probably more. Those were incredible stories. Anyway, I have nothing against it. It can be very ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: Flash Fiction Fight!
I liked the way the mist curled around her when I looked at her, how it draped over her face like a wedding veil; she wasn't pretty, but I if ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Imagery
Jabz, you're awesome for reviving this! In other news, my guess, after some thought, is pumpkin, or perhaps pumpkin patch. It's almost beautiful, the way the clouds spin like pottery ...
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Just some of my pictures.
Pretty photographs. Could you make the captions even smaller, though? I think I can still read it if I squint really hard and push the screen against my face. This^
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Summer and the Fireworks
1. If that odd mass of smoke wasn't covering the left side of the picture, this would have been excellent. Actually, the smoke gives it a kind of diluted texture, ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Reflection
Hi there! I'm not the best at reviewing art or photography, so forgive me if my critiques make no sense whatsoever. This is an excellent idea for a photograph. Hope ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Name Finding Tips
I'm with fire_of_dawn - Behind the Name works excellently for my purposes.
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: YWLJ Cover Submissions
Mmm. These are different. So. I'm not sure about the first one, simply because the towers seem a bit...crowded, if you know what I mean, towards the right, and the ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: YWLJ Cover. :)
This is excellent. It's colorful, but not in the try-to-be-bright-and-pretty-but-fail type way. This is vivid because the layout is thought-out, the colors are carefully chosen, etc., etc. Honestly, I
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Literary Journal Cover
Hey. So, these were...interesting. They are dark-ish, but, contrary to what the previous reviewers said, I think it would work excellently as a cover for a compilation of works (as ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: YWLJ Cover Submissions
I love the first one, but, like Persy mentioned, the rigidity and shadowed quality of the pencils contrasts a bit too sharply with the placid blue background and delicate writing. ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Imagery
Mmm...was your word "lion?" Very well done, by the way. Something is pressing against your leg. It is a subtle observation, as if the pressure had been there for hours, ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Imagery
A Brief Introduction The ability to forge images from words is perhaps one of the most important aspects in writing. The best writers, as far as imagery goes (Conrad, Lovecraft, ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: How to make an Animated Avatar
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Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Nature art!!
Hey, Arty! Looks like you've got some pretty good reviews already, but perhaps I can offer my opinion. Let's look at each picture individually. Picture 1: Incredible. This is by ...
Mar 30, 2011
