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Kafkaescence

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Back Home

    This is great. It is not original, but I like the suspense you build along the way. Your style possesses voice. And voice is a difficult thing for many writers ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: CUBE: Inside the Tesseract, Chapter One

    This is chapter one of the first installment, "Inside the Tesseract," in a trilogy of short novels I plan write called "CUBE." They were inspired by the book "The Grand ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Foggy Morning

    Well. I guess I can simply say that I neither loved nor hated this photo. There is nothing truly spectacular about it, but nothing absolutely horrible either. Problem is, I ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: my art

    I like the design. Looks like it could be a tattoo or symbol for...something. I'm sure you've gotten a lot of this, but my main critique would have to be ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Take A Walk With Me, Dad.

    This really is a beautiful poem. I loved reading it - especially near the end. The very last line was most enviable. Here are some quibbles of mine: He said, ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Outcasts Prologue And Chapter One

    Hey! I started this a while ago, and decided I might as well post this in hope of some reviews so it isn't so crappy. Anyway, I hope you like ...

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Squills - The YWS News Re: News Flash: Only Nate Posts In The "In The News" Forum

    ...Wait, there's a "news" forum?

    Jan 19, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Aurora: Prologue

    This is a very interesting piece. I love science fiction stories like the one that this prologue is suggestive of - ones that make one question the ideals of the ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: My Photography

    I've never been much of a photographer myself, so ignore this review if you want. Even though these were not taken with the best camera, I love them. On the ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Estrangement

    At this fork in the road, you must decide on whether you would like to suffer this avalanche, or look into the eyes of the fox, who rests, weeping, on ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Funeral of an Adopted Mother

    I am very glad to have come across this. You have a beautiful writing style - almost poetic, but just enough so that it can still be considered a short ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lifeline

    I liked, if not loved, this poem. You have a good rhythm, a good idea, and good imagery. Here are my critiques: you’re tracing thoughts into the lines of my ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Burden

    I like this poem. I like it a lot. You have a voice - a voice that you maintain throughout the piece. It was this - the voice - that ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: City Lights Come Crashing Down

    You are a very good poet. I loved the metaphors, I loved the story interwoven with the metaphysicalness of the more emotional statements. This piece was beautifully crafted. Here is ...

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: This Sky Will Betray You

    I suppose that at this point it is time to ask myself, How do you do it? You are a very adroit poet. Here is my complete edit: This sky ...

    Jan 18, 2011


What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal.
— Albert Pines