Kafkaescence

I come from a long line of left wing supporters. I also live in Portland, Oregon, and because of this am highly influenced in my political beliefs by my community. ...

There are no Happily Ever Afters, Fairy Tale Endings, or Once Upon a Times, if in reality there is no true love ; it is only in myths, stories and ...

Hey Cat! Call me Kafka. It definitely can be confusing at first. You are right about that. But you learn quickly, especially since everyone I've met on the site has ...

Hey, Raven! Man, I agree with Ear. Wish I'd seen this when I signed up. Probably would have made everything so much easier. It's great because you can meet and ...

With so many thoughts swirling in my head, it’s hard to know just where to begin. How about another word in the place of "swirling?" With so many problems faced ...

I laughed as you had got caught in my flames. Instead of "had got," try "were." I laughed because I was tired of your games. Nice. You cried out to ...

Hey, Paul! I had no idea you wrote poetry! You should do it more often. Here are my humble critiques: We see the hurt We see the pain I'd say ...

Glad to hear more from you! I'll dive right in. I wake in the early bright of the morning; "Early bright" sounds strange. Seems like your getting Perse's habit of ...

A high keynote, followed by wooden melodies and calloused fingers; the edge of a string being the edge of the earth in this jagged game. Harmonies chopped up like corpses ...

Wow, thanks!

Well, here I am again for chapter two. Sorry about the wait. Now, this chapter was short, just like the first one. I would consider perhaps increasing the length of ...

-The Temptress- My new shape fits me well. Like a glove. Nice analogy. I wiggle my fingers experimentally, and laugh as they do what they should. "Do what they should" ...

"Lavern...." I see the hand on my arm. Such a perfect hand. Smooth, tan. I glance over my shoulder and see Sorina's eyes before I do anything else. I let ...

Always heard of love but never experienced it. You may want to consider tweaking the wording of this first line. Is there such a thing as true love; or is ...

Travelers Two travelers were hiking upon a dirt path that wound its way through a forest. They walked for days, and eventually reached a shallow river. A thin bridge was ...