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Your benthic sorrows, engraved into the depths of this archaic heart, now swaying, now plunging; it beats still, pumping blood into your face. Stalactites drip from the crimson tooth, sharp ...

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The mask is on… I hide my shame; But who’s to blame If not myself, Here, in this audience of one? Excellent. I love the last two lines especially, because ...

five box cutters, two centerfolds, one fax machine, nine pieces of tape , Nice four opening lines. I'm counting all pieces It took for me to be happy and finally ...

Nice work! This poem is just pure emotion. Normally I tend to like more imagery, but you do a very good job with it nonetheless. The main problem I had ...

As a school assignment, I had to write two poems using the Shi poetry format. Enjoy! Cave Slender path through the abyss, marred by dying fluctuations and eternal sleep; can ...

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Okay, I'm back. We were sitting in the back seats, invisible to the actors in the all-too-familiar drama playing out in front of us. I can't decide whether I like ...

I'll tell you about a place that I have known Nice start. Don't think you need the "that." Where the wind blows all night. Where you hear the moaning, high ...

It was the ocean It was the sea This is the ideal place to insert a powerful metaphor. How about "family tree" or "undersea?" It was their god, Their hope, ...

Laughter bounces off the walls A tad bit cliched. as many merry people meet to do what we all love. Hmm...I don't know if I like "meet." Perform. Too straightforward ...

Interesting. This is quite different from your normal poetry style. I'm not sure if I like it better or not, but I'll see what I can make of it. city ...

Hey, Paul! Sorry about the delay. Everything dies. And I mean everything . Trust me; I'm generally accepted to be the expert on the subject. But don't take my word ...

Hi! Call me Kafka. Glad you came across the site! It was definitely a great choice getting an account here. There's never a shortage of things to do - from ...

so funny. I 'm laughing. sarcasm seethes off tongue, Put something in front of tongue: "my," "the," a," whatever you want. I hope it scalds on the way; On the ...