Kafkaescence

Okay, so I know there's an art to this kind of poetry, but this is my first swing at it, so enjoy! X's can be dangerous when capital- -ized, ized ...

Crescendoing colors burst from beneath his eyes; Great. it was like he'd been staring at the sun for a decade, Not sure what this is supposed to accomplish. I don't ...

Kindle your spirit, stoke your drive, forge your self, Sounds strange because "yourself" is usually one word, and though in this context it wouldn't work that way, it is next ...

It has been done.

Prologue: Genesis of the Beginning Forêt Des Quatre Piliers, France: February 10 10:19| The metal sphere dimmed ; the light receding from the room , and once again leaving it ...

“So how did you find me here?” Mr. Daniels took a sip of his coffee, decided that it was too hot to drink, and then set it back down on ...

Done! Any more?

Wow...I watched the video, and this was very well put together. Actually, I think the "half page down" line somehow fits. It makes you think, and can definitely be interpreted ...

I've got a novel going, so if you want to take a quick look at it, I'd be delighted. I understand this may be a bit much, so if you're ...

So, thanks for the request! The strides he took from the stairwell to the master bedroom were unconsciously quick and silent. He paused his walking (this is implied) at the ...

“Goodbye dad,” said the boy. “Tell them I said hello, will you? Tell I'm sorry for what happened. Tell them that I'm happy now, and that I love them...” At ...

Tear it apart. -Kafka

If the idea of getting a review from me excites and arouses you, be aware that I will only review literary works that have been well-proofread. I don't have time ...

I don't understand humans. Good start. They eat, they sleep, they live, they die. [Every life is the same, give or take. You are born, you live, and you die. ...

She ran hot water over her hand. Good start! The blue of her veins turned green in her eyes, This line sounds odd: it sounds too unrelated to the first ...