Kafkaescence

Even today when I listen to those songs it brings in old memories along. Those meetings, those calls. Were they false or had any meaning at all? How about just ...

Ha. You give me a challenge, Ehte. Yes. This will require extreme reviewing ninja skills. However, nothing scares this user. Except llamas. But that's beside the point. So. Lend me ...

Bleh. Thanks for requesting a review. I was getting pretty bored. Actually was doing the sudoku , believe it or not. Who does the sudoku? I guess I do. Or ...

Today is a beautiful day. The clouds are towering, a Rolling, boiling mass of heartbleed blue Uh...boiling? While I crick my neck and spin, my undeserving Dunno about "undeserving." Too ...

I call, I scream, I shout a name. Meh. Not sure I like the last part. But who can I trust, just who can I blame? I think the "just" ...

Satin sheen, Nice start. softened green gleaming, I think just "soft" would suffice. rumpled, with the hours. "Rumpled?" Ack. Not an impressive word. And "with the hours" sounds somewhat odd ...

Spectrum of col-col-numbers, numb brrs in the cold, inin thethe dead night ofof night, wrecking the (system) of palindromes*, drawn on onward by [cracks] in the dæbreak, hack, h..h...hurt/blood shini

Disrupt the signal, now swaying, now pressed into the visual screens that buzz with chemicals and blips in the soundscape. Shock, lightspeed, cybernetic hibernation spreading and targeting the masochi

Done X 2.

Here I am. Sorry about the delay. My girlfriend dumped me today. Right next to my locker during the passing period between third and fourth hour Whoa. Location/general time/specific time ...

I sit there, abandoned; "Sit" is bland...I think "lie" might be better. Also, this line in general is pretty cliched. That thing you never use. You could put in a ...

If there was never a word that I could offer, Start poems with a bang. This is more like a measly whimper. There was not enough hatred, Okay. Establishing the ...

Can you feel that static? Nice opening line. running through the yellow grass, cut ever so close. "Cut ever so close?" To what? I'm not sure what to picture here. ...

Haha, believe me, I was just as confused as you are when I joined! I see Hut has already showed you how to review. I personally click on the button ...

Can you take a look at this? -Kafka