Kafkaescence

Uh, yeah. Firstly, this is not a prologue. Or, at least, should not be labeled as one. Character development, story development, and all that good stuff happens while the actual ...

I was just wondering if you ever get breaks. Have fun!

Hullo. I. In our railroad novel, we break between the blasts of rattling carraiges, turning our eyes to the stars, warped by old, scratched plastic windows. We fall into the ...

Hey. So, these were...interesting. They are dark-ish, but, contrary to what the previous reviewers said, I think it would work excellently as a cover for a compilation of works (as ...

Realized I had this stored away in my drafts, and figured I might as well post it as is. Sorry that it's a bit unfinished. Have you ever been down ...

Finally got to this. Okay. Under oaken arms, we can't help but bend and break; and so here, right now, we fall into hoarseness and frustration, crying out "we don't ...

I love the first one, but, like Persy mentioned, the rigidity and shadowed quality of the pencils contrasts a bit too sharply with the placid blue background and delicate writing. ...

Nightshade finally got me to start writing poetry again, so I thought I might whip something together. I'm a bit rusty, so I wouldn't mind some harsh reviews. in the ...

Eesh. Hopefully there was no rush to this. To be honest, I found this a bit...cluttered. You have an interesting idea in mind, but it is unnecessarily difficult to grasp ...

Wazzup. Corrections/my comments will be in red. Monday, April 26, 1999 Dear Hannah, Your father sent me pictures of you from the Passover Seder, and I can not cannot believe ...

Patty and I are pretty close.

Well, I'm here. Told you it might take a while. Well, this was...interesting, I suppose. I've never really been a fan of prose that is stuffed to the tearing point ...

Hullo! Kafka here! ...I'm late. Really late. Oh, well. Here goes. Behind the cloud of dreams. Don't think you want a period here. Isn't really grammatically correct, and kills the ...

Mmm...was your word "lion?" Very well done, by the way. Something is pressing against your leg. It is a subtle observation, as if the pressure had been there for hours, ...

Here I am, finally. Corrections are in red. "What's with you and these crazy ideas?" "Haha, you're like some sort of fairy tale!" "Calm down! Stop twirling around every which ...