Kafkaescence

Wrote these while camping. Since there're three of them, feel free to review however many you would like. Enjoy (if possible). This one is my favorite, though it's also probably ...

I'll be on a camping trip for a while, so I won't be able to review this till I get back. Don't think I've forgotten! I'll whip up something of ...

Gonna be camping for about a week. Miss you guys.

I'm going to kill you all. D'AWW :3 Such a big girl. ;)

Chapter four. Man, I really need to speed things up a bit. What is it you were trying to accomplish by adding this chapter? What do you feel this chapter ...

I'm back! I really enjoyed this. In contrast with the last chapter, it seemed your dialog, both internal and external, was much more Middle-English sounding. One cannot say that a ...

At this point, I'm not sure whether to compare your story to Cinderella or My Side of the Mountain. You're going to have to choose. I have absolutely no idea ...

Save a spot for me. I'll try to get to this fairly soon.

Kyllorac! I don't believe we've been properly introduced. This is a cute start to a story, but there are some issues that I think would be worth pointing out. I'll ...

Mmm. These are different. So. I'm not sure about the first one, simply because the towers seem a bit...crowded, if you know what I mean, towards the right, and the ...

Hello, onceuponatim3xo! I believe we've been acquainted. This is a nice start to a story. Above all, it is your ability to create characters, to develop linguistic entities so deliciously ...

This seems to be a different style from what you usually do. I can definitely see a bit of Kamas and MMM in this, and I'm glad you're exploring some ...

Where are the fireworks?

This is excellent. It's colorful, but not in the try-to-be-bright-and-pretty-but-fail type way. This is vivid because the layout is thought-out, the colors are carefully chosen, etc., etc. Honestly, I

Dead Religion is pretty bad, but atheism is even worse. I am not aware of many atheists who do not believe in some form of evolution, so I won't waste ...