Kafkaescence

I have absolutely no idea about the extent to which this short story is true, but for the purpose of this review, let's assume it's fictitious. Love can be split ...

When I hover my mouse over the YWS button on the black bar near the top, the dropdown menu doesn't seem to appear. :|

Sorry it's taken me this long. My review is mainly going to be spent focusing on nitpicks, because this chapter is simply littered with grammatical mistakes and inane contradictions. When ...

Of Gypsies I met a Gypsy the other day. He was ordering a drink in the old pub that made its bearing on the corner of Hemming Street; "Since 1914" ...

Hullo! Didn't I say I would come? I've always admired your ability to develop characters. This is evident in pretty much everything that I've read of yours, and this is ...

Er, I'm late. Oh well. Snoink and Skins both brought it up already, so this critique won't sound at all new to you, but the laptop thing kind of bugged ...

SmylinG - Huh. To be honest, humor wasn't quite the objective of the second story, but I can easily see what you mean. It was meant to serve as something ...

Hi there! I'm not the best at reviewing art or photography, so forgive me if my critiques make no sense whatsoever. This is an excellent idea for a photograph. Hope ...

WUT? You have something new? And it's a contest entry? How did you manage to slip this past me? Expect a review on this. Sometime. -Kafka

Here I am, finally. Before we move on to the juice of the review, there're a few little nitpicks I'd like to point out. Crooks never repainted the fucking floors, ...

I'm with fire_of_dawn - Behind the Name works excellently for my purposes.

who needs grammar Apparently not pigs. Grammar is overrated.

This looks interesting. Expect a review from me sometime, if not soon. -Kafka

This is...me. Picture 0041.JPG This is me with a bit of editing.

Ah, finally got to this. Not so much to critique here. I like the fact that you decided to move on with the story at this point instead of continuing ...