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Re: What's your favourite word?
Kafkaesque , for obvious reasons. I also like agathocacological (containing both good and evil), xanthochroid (blond, blue-eyed, and fair-skinned), lo (look! see!) and pusillanimous (timid or scared).
Jul 26, 2011 - Re: Post your pie here Jul 26, 2011
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Re: Best Films You've Ever Seen
Cube trilogy Inception Spirited Away 9 The Secret of Kells The King's Speech The Fighter Catch Me if You Can Rango (lol) Sam I Am Avatar Harry Potter series
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: The Crows
I haven't forgotten about this! I'll be leaving for a few days shortly, but I'll review this more or less the minute I get back, kay?
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: A tale of an automaton
There's a reason the formatting of this piece looks strange, and it's not (at least, I don't think it is) because of the Word Document to YWS transfer. Actually, it's ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Newton's Apple
Hmm. You took your prompt in a direction that, I must say, I wasn't expecting. But, despite my contrary prognosis of spaceships and all that stuff, I found this appealing. ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: The Legionnaire
A dark force Not enough. Metaphorical dark, or literal dark? What kind of force? splattered the walls with gore. Elongated white remains Are these human remains? This would explain the ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Create a Tumblr for your Main Character
I must meet this Kafka girl. We have much to discuss.
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Just some of my pictures.
Pretty photographs. Could you make the captions even smaller, though? I think I can still read it if I squint really hard and push the screen against my face. This^
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Robotic Heart
There are a few ways one could look at this story. From a literal perspective, this is but a tragedy that took a detour. Towards the beginning, the reader sees ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Seven
I'm back again. I sure hope there's no rush to this. ;) First, nitpicks. Living with Harry was like nothing I’d ever experienced before. His direct approach to life was ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies -Chapter Six
First, nitpicks. I was awoken the next morning as the noise thundered through the little shop, shaking the floors. Could be much more effective. Rework this so that the reader ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
When I hover my mouse over the YWS button on the black bar near the top, the dropdown menu doesn't seem to appear. :| Aye, I got rid of it. ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Are you writing a novel?
My vote goes to Pat Buchanan. Wait, what was the question?
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Summer and the Fireworks
1. If that odd mass of smoke wasn't covering the left side of the picture, this would have been excellent. Actually, the smoke gives it a kind of diluted texture, ...
Jul 6, 2011
