Kafkaescence

I wasn't sure I liked chapter this *quite* as much as the first. You sounded rushed, more rushed than you needed to be, considering how much there was to be ...

Alright! I'm totally going to do this. I'll try for one review a day, so hopefully this won't be too long. Still - ten's a daunting number. >.> This is ...

Bonjour. I haven't read any of the other reviews, so I apologize if I repeat anything. I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours; it was, needless to say, ...

I used to be Kafkaescence. Now I'm...still Kafkaescence.

...This is still going?

child-feet walk in shadows words stitching red marks down backs and wondering when the tree will fall, wonder when impaling twigs will catch them off-stride. little hands dig little seeds ...

She looks just like him , (Italicized so that we know that it is an actual thought, and that "I think" is not simply parenthetical.) I think as they take ...

DreamWalker pretty much nailed it. Poetry is an art in itself. It is an art that yearns to be explored, dissected, experimented with. It is an art that craves metaphor; ...

Joshua! Sorry it's taken me so long. I've been busy, what with school starting up and all. This was a very intriguing story. Your grammar and phrasing could be touched ...

Chapter Two - finally! This one's a bit rougher than Chapter One was, so any nitpicks would be very welcome. I'm also interested in hearing how I did as far ...

Juliet’s sister-in-law Rella giggles at this practice, because Charming is so entirely different in her eyes. But Juliet knows her twin brother, knows how he dreams and loves him for ...

Before we begin, Hey guys! I'm new here, but I'd love to hear what you think about this article that I wrote Thank you ever so much for your feedback! ...

Here as requested! I think a nitpick review will serve my purposes best here. I killed a lamb last week. See, you say this, and it's a great first sentence ...

1984. It made me feel cuddly.

No. I already bought it.