Kafkaescence

Wow. Wow. Okay. Lots to digest here, like last chapter. As always, Twit, your style was charming, intriguing, all that. I'm beginning to get a sense of where this story ...

Ring. Ring. Oh, cliched beginning. Is that really all you can think of? My hand shot out in a flurry of motion, Right, well, guess what: at four in the ...

Don't know why, but I'm in the mood for reviewing poetry at the moment. But what I'm seeing here is not so much poetry as a crunched-down philosophy essay, or ...

Nostalgia, like memories of being five-years-old, and mom turning up the tender lullabies of Van Morrison or Santana while men barbeque; mesquite smoke clinging to their clothes. The fragrances of ...

Right. I think it would be safe to consider this up to serial killer "snuff" (a fitting idiom). It's usually the detective character that is assigned the role of protagonist ...

And PS thought that she was late.... Anyway, this was a great chapter, like everyone else said. The dissection (if it can be called that) process was infinitely vivid, the ...

Why did the monkey fall out of the tree? It was dead.

Wow, it turned out great! Nice work!

There is an art to shorter stories like these, just as there is in poetry and novels. Their goal is not as complex as, say, developing a character, or some ...

Jabz, you're awesome for reviving this! In other news, my guess, after some thought, is pumpkin, or perhaps pumpkin patch. It's almost beautiful, the way the clouds spin like pottery ...

‘...and Eesh, not sure whether to capitalize this "and" or not. There're good arguments for either choice, so I guess the best thing to do would be to leave it ...

This is great. It's one of those rare poems that not only radiate with beautiful imagery, but radiate from beneath the surface. The representations are so simple, so parallel with ...

Eesh, forgot I owed you this one. Apropos A random word? What's the significance? We don't know the context. . Her parting word, etched in black ink on a torn ...

I'm heeere. This was intriguing, Lava. I'm assuming that its purpose was more scientific than it was literary - "scientific," of course, meaning science-fiction-experimentalism, if you get my meaning.

Yeah, you're cool. :wink: