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Re: Happy Birthday, YWS!
Just wait till it reaches puberty....
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Lerra
H'oh crap, well, at least you keep me busy. Let's see. I reread it (I didn't notice anything different, so either your edit was exceedingly minute or you haven't put ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: What genres do you write in?
1. I used to write pretty much exclusively in the dark fiction genre, but have somewhat moved away from that now. 2. What would you call it? Experimental scifi? Fantasy? ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Hello everyone!
Hi, Kadi! You can call me Kafka. I'm so glad you happened upon our site! New members are always very welcome. If your friends have told you about all our ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Finding Nirvana
Brittani I really love my him; that is what much I know. I have loved him since we were in 8th eighth grade, ever since we had history together. I ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: What we all endure
Ahaha. It's hard not to appreciate stories narrated from the perspective of inanimate objects, and I think you've done a respectable job here. For its length, your story of an ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Hola Mi amigos!
I use it for EVERYTHING.
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: I am a Soul
................ I AM A SOUL................. In the rainy forest deep in it's core Deep in the core of a(n) (adjective) rainforest , I seek the wondrous place which all souls ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: teething on time
Ah, liked this. It had that overgrown style that is prominent in most of your poetry, but, as opposed to past reads, this felt much more...cohesive, as far as the ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: A Schoolgirl's Bane
Um, so. I won't say that I liked this. That would be commensurate to saying that I liked the cliché(s) that frame it, and I don't. I find them irksome. ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Parting
How long has it been since I reviewed poetry. This was interesting, Mustard. It's a nice commentary on mortality and its clasp on bliss - the two being, in essence, ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The Pink Unicorn Parade!
The pink unicorns were out. I got the next best thing.
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Lerra
Mmm...again, interesting. I wouldn't say it has quite the same...moral cohesiveness, let's call it, as Life After . Its foundations are shaky. You seem, more than anything here, to be ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: ancientforever is November's Featured Member!
Good job!
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Life after
Not bad but, yeah, there is some editing that is in order. I won't go into that, because I decided after reading this that "macros" would be of more use ...
Nov 1, 2011
