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Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey, Ashlyn. (: I'm KD. Welcome to the site! Meh, I'm not too good at poetry, so I don't know if I can really give you any good critiques in ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Hi! My name is Twitter
Hey Twitter. Do you like Twitter? Haha. Anyways, welcome to the site! *hands cookie* I'm Kaedee. Or KD. I dance too! What styles do you do? Have you just started, ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Wedding Present!
Hey, Shep. I'm not going to critique this, since it's based on a real person who I don't know, so I've obviously never seen her before. I can tell you, ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Second Chances
^^ Thanks, Jordan! You're not generally supposed to know exactly why he's standing out in the rain...I leave it to the reader to think of different ideas, haha.
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.2) [newly edited]
Hi! Have I ever told you that I love your username? It's totally a username I would use, 'cause, hey! it's related to chocolate. And it sounds cool. (Meh, you ...
Jul 10, 2010 -
Re: Rated 'E' = Everyone!!!!
Hiya, Jungle. The first one is best, in my opinion, the second to last one getting a close second place! I wish I could reach out and pet his fur. ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Backyard in the summer
Welcome to the site! :D I'm KD. This is nice! I love how blurry the background is, and how it only looks like little circles, which brings the my attention ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Always Waiting (Chapter Two)
Whoa, I didn't know I got another review on this! Thanks. ^^ Yeah, I started doing the whole formatting thing recently. Know what you mean; maybe I'll go over and ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Tweaked
Hey Jem. Yeah, you know what I'm doing. #1: This is okay. I love your sparkly nail polish...that's for sure! #2: Wow, this is so cool. I love how everything ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Say That You Love Me
One thing, shouldn't this be rated 16+? (: Meh, I dunno.
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Provincial Writing Contest Entry
Lavender! I think this is what you were talking about in your blog, so, as I said, I'm here to review it! Since Kyllorac just gave you some great advice ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.1) [newly edited]
Hi Coco! KD here to review as sort of requested ^^; I'll try to review this like I've never read it before, since you edited the whole story. (Anyways, I ...
Jul 8, 2010 -
Re: The Date
Hi, winter. KD here to review! This was cute. I had fun reading this. But, this needs some work. The Pacing First I'll go over the speed of this story. ...
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: At My Grandmother's Garden
Since this was just for a certain thing for your grandma, I'll just tell you my favs. #1 and #2 are the best. *nods approvingly* Yuupp. Cya round! ~KD
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: Nerdstar (a Rockstar parody)
*likes* Awesome, as usual! ^^ Ugh, I wish I had some critiques for you, but I never do. *pouts* Haha. ~KD
Jul 4, 2010
