Kaedee

Two chapters in a day! I'm ambitious, right? xD my decision to marry Decision? Didn't her uncle say that it actually really wasn't her decision, after all? He had been ...

Coco! Haha, I feel like I haven't been on YWS for ages. Sorry I'm taking such a long time... The hairs on my arm stood on end at the thought. ...

Heya, VitaminCakes! That's so sad. :( I think this topic/piece has lots of promise. But, this needs some work. I feel that you need to connect to the reader more. ...

8-9/10 Cute!

Beach!

Flow

Hey there! KD here for an overall(ish) review. Characters: This whole story was, to me, basically 1oo% Draco. So, good job. That's probably one of the most important parts of ...

Heya! May I ask: how many more chapters do you have left to post? The next day I entered the library and silently contemplated over the possible reasons why I ...

Hiya! Welcome to YWS! *hands cookie* Okay. This has a nice flow to it. You also have some nice descriptions going on in here! But, let's get straight to the ...

...No? Ah, that really freaks me out.

Pop. Nothing new. :)

Dialogue, dialogue, dialogue. It's easy for me. And it's fun to write and read.

I'd grab my glasses and go out the door... Well, y'know what happens next. :wink: What would you do if YWS got taken over by monkeys?

Australia

Heya, Lewis! Welcome to the site. Wow, I'm the first to post here! (That is, if someone doesn't post while I'm writing this comment.) Sweet. Anyways, I'm Kaedee! Well, that's ...