Kaedee

Dress.

Childhood is innocence. Childhood is a small, sound proof box, tucked away in a corner of the world. The box is a child’s shield. The happy, cozy little box is ...

Nose.

Hey Gillian & Truth! :D Welcome to the site! Yes, if you guys have any questions, just PM a mod (users w/ green names), or, if you want, you can ...

Hey Random! :D Heheh. Okay, I'd be happy to review this, once you re-size these pics. Elinor's post on how to re-size with Photobucket How to re-size without Photobucket Hope ...

Metal.

Heya Doris! Wow, this picture gives me such a nice feeling. It's so smooth and flowing. I love the style. Anyways. The thing that seemed to bug me, is how ...

Hey crafty! Welcome to the site. I'm Kaedee. Or KD. Whatever you want, basically. ^^ So. I can tell this really does have lots of potential. This was fun to ...

Swan Lake (ballet)

Overall/The Story so Far: Again, more detailed expressions (also so your characters don't seem blank), reactions, voice descriptions, etc. would help to get the reader more into the moment, since ...

“One moment, Lady Millicent,” I said, moving towards my bed and bringing out a small wooden box from underneath where I kept some of my most precious items. Underneath my ...

Tears

(\_/) (='.'=) (")_(") I found that guy in my phone xD (

Hi, Becca! Lol, I love your username. I live in New York, Cool; there's a handful of New Yorkers on YWS. I've mostly written [bad] poetry, Still probably better than ...

Hey desired! I'm KD. Welcome to the site! Yep, it's pretty awesome. Haha. How did you find it? Google? Yeah, a lot of us like doing both art and writing, ...