Kaedee

Stick. (This is so addicting.)

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it! It's great to know that you're still following, and my story hasn't gotten boring. Yet. Hopefully never, though. Maybe sometime I can ...

I thought the hair was nice. Yes, as others have said, you should color in the skin to give her more complexion...she looks so pale...coloring her skin would make your ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee, here to review your work today. I read this yesterday! I don't have a problem with long pieces as long as you don't...have to...plow...through them. Which you... ...

Nice job! I loved it. The pic and your sketch look very similar. I thought you did pretty well with the shading...I can't help you on that though, since I'm ...

Nice! =D the Dumbledore and dance the hippogriff!' ~KD

Welcome to YWS! I'm Kaedee. *waves* Here are some corrections for you. Okay. I see you used the special Quote button for your dialogue...that's not what it's for! :) People ...

Oh, that's not what I meant! Sorry about that. I was talking about the word 'girliest'...yep, I don't think many people these days smear their lips with blood! :P ~KD

Hi Kayay, it's Kaedee, here to review again. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I'm getting to like the characters very much, especially the Mistress's character...your friend has done ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee. So I guess I'm here to 'tell you if it sucks or not'. :) So... I don't think it sucks at all! The idea is in multiple ...

Hehe...I love it! :) ~KD

I'll show you exactly how to fix it later, but I gotta go now. By the way, could you tell me who is talking when? That way it will be ...

I'm back, TTT! Can I call you that? I hope that's OK. Now, let's get to work. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I loved how you put in ...

Hey, I'm Kaedee and I'll be reviewing your work today! OK, let's start. *rubs hands together* Things I Like/Things You Did Well On -This was fun to read! -Anybody can ...

By the 'Edit' button there is an X button. Click on that. If that doesn't work, possibly there is a bug.