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Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2
Fish.
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: FAshionDesign2@shubhiloves2write
Hey Shubhi, it's me again, here to critique your work. :) I don't have any suggestions, but I have to say I really liked the colors. They worked well together. ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Fashion Designing @shubhiloves2write
Hey, it's Kaedee! I love how at the torso area this dress is asymmetrical, which gives it character. You did a great job, as everyone else said. If you want ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Daddy's Girl(Title Still Pondering)
Hey, Quetseli. Kaedee here to review! Since this is short (which is not a problem at all), I'm not going to review this my normal way. This prologue was written ...
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: Rosalie (Short Piece)
Thanks for the feedback! Looking over my piece again to edit. ~KD
Mar 2, 2010 -
Re: 21 Days
Hey, MysteryWriter, welcome to YWS! I'm Kaedee. Forest covered all the nitpicks, so I'm going to leave that part alone for now. I'm going to suggest a few things: -I ...
Mar 1, 2010 -
Re: Anime
Oh by the way, you missed the red markish things on the girl's cheeks in the second drawing, but you probably just forgot. :)
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Anime
Hey iCarlyfan, I've seen both movies also! I think you did perfectly on the first one (Ashitaka). Great job! The second one (Haku) was very simple, but nice. You could ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Always Waiting (Chapter One)
Thanks for the feedback. As I said before, I know what you guys mean. The girl's mom is dead, but I'm planning for the girl to find her dad one ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Always Waiting (Chapter One)
Thanks for the review! Totally know what you mean about not 'going down a path of cliches' with this orphan story. It'll be different than most, I promise you! :) ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Triple Travel Tales Part 2
“Clustered in and around Saint Mark's Square are the most famous buildings of Venice. The Bell tour is one of them. During the day, St. Mark's Square is filled with ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Rosalie (Short Piece)
I miss you, Rosalie. I miss your laughter and your smile. Both were so contagious. You brightened everyone’s day when you walked through the door. You sat next to those ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Rising Angel
Hey, Pacific_Sky. I'm Kaedee, here to critique your drawing! Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -You did pretty well on proportions overall. -Simply adore the wings and hair! Well ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Triple Travel Tales Part 2
Sorry about that! I meant, who is talking here: In Rome there’s the Colosseum! The Colosseum is so interesting it has so much history in its architecture. The Colosseum (Colosseo) ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Random Youtube Videos
Adorable parrot vids. Yet odd. And then this classic:
Feb 27, 2010
