User avatar

Kaedee

  • Writing Activities Re: Speedwrite the word above you #2

    Fish.

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: FAshionDesign2@shubhiloves2write

    Hey Shubhi, it's me again, here to critique your work. :) I don't have any suggestions, but I have to say I really liked the colors. They worked well together. ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Fashion Designing @shubhiloves2write

    Hey, it's Kaedee! I love how at the torso area this dress is asymmetrical, which gives it character. You did a great job, as everyone else said. If you want ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Daddy's Girl(Title Still Pondering)

    Hey, Quetseli. Kaedee here to review! Since this is short (which is not a problem at all), I'm not going to review this my normal way. This prologue was written ...

    Mar 2, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Rosalie (Short Piece)

    Thanks for the feedback! Looking over my piece again to edit. ~KD

    Mar 2, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: 21 Days

    Hey, MysteryWriter, welcome to YWS! I'm Kaedee. Forest covered all the nitpicks, so I'm going to leave that part alone for now. I'm going to suggest a few things: -I ...

    Mar 1, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime

    Oh by the way, you missed the red markish things on the girl's cheeks in the second drawing, but you probably just forgot. :)

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime

    Hey iCarlyfan, I've seen both movies also! I think you did perfectly on the first one (Ashitaka). Great job! The second one (Haku) was very simple, but nice. You could ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Always Waiting (Chapter One)

    Thanks for the feedback. As I said before, I know what you guys mean. The girl's mom is dead, but I'm planning for the girl to find her dad one ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Always Waiting (Chapter One)

    Thanks for the review! Totally know what you mean about not 'going down a path of cliches' with this orphan story. It'll be different than most, I promise you! :) ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Triple Travel Tales Part 2

    “Clustered in and around Saint Mark's Square are the most famous buildings of Venice. The Bell tour is one of them. During the day, St. Mark's Square is filled with ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Rosalie (Short Piece)

    I miss you, Rosalie. I miss your laughter and your smile. Both were so contagious. You brightened everyone’s day when you walked through the door. You sat next to those ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Rising Angel

    Hey, Pacific_Sky. I'm Kaedee, here to critique your drawing! Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -You did pretty well on proportions overall. -Simply adore the wings and hair! Well ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Triple Travel Tales Part 2

    Sorry about that! I meant, who is talking here: In Rome there’s the Colosseum! The Colosseum is so interesting it has so much history in its architecture. The Colosseum (Colosseo) ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Random Youtube Videos

    Adorable parrot vids. Yet odd. And then this classic:

    Feb 27, 2010


Be led by your talent and not by your self-loathing ... everything beautiful in the world is within you.
— Russell Brand