Kaedee

Hey, I'm Kaedee. I'll be your review today! The beginning of this chapter was funny, starting with Becca having a bloody nose since she banged it on a glass table ...

*likes* Great job! This was cute and clever. I hardly ever read poetry, so I can't really critique this. My favorite line: If beauty made life you'd bring up a ...

Wow. That's what I was just about to say! Very interesting story. Haha...and very funny! I loved the narrator's voice, which was amusing and entertaining. The thing is, the story ...

Hehe. Today I wished everyone (who was listed) who had a birthday...happy birthday! In their guest books.

Hey Anonymous, welcome to YWS. I'm Kaedee, your reviewer today. Well done! Bravo! You did a magnificent job. *clicks 'Like' button* I hardly ever do that, which clearly shows my ...

I just choked on a piece of bread. Ugh. But it was really good besides that. ~KD

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But the more that I think about it, Twilight is actually pretty bad. Bad fad. (Ooh, that rhymes!) ~KD

Hey, Dasiamari, Kaedee is here to review...I was drawn by your title, which literally dragged me into your story. Good job with that! OK, I guess I will add some ...

This is my favorite out of all of yours. ~KD

Beautiful. I especially like how an un-bloomed lily is standing next to a fully blossomed one. I love the way the sun shines down on the lily pads, the water, ...

Nice! There should be some challenge: Make a short story using all the emoticons given on YWS. Or something of that nature. I'm sure you would excel. ;) ~KD

Hey, Forest. Kaedee, here to review. I liked this. I enjoyed the narrator's voice. The only way to make this much better, is if you described surroundings more and the ...

I'm not exactly new, but...thanks anyway! It's never too late for a proper welcome. :wink: ~KD

Hey, I'm Kaedee, here to review today! This is so short! Put up more and you will get more critique ^^ Yes, I agree...you will be adding more to this, ...