Kaedee

I will critique the Alice one today! Things That I Like/Things You Did Well On: -The hair! So light and airy. Beautiful. I love your strokes! So smooth... -Shading on ...

*Likes* As everyone else said, the angle is very interesting! When I saw 'A lone bench' I wasn't expecting something creative like this. The angle makes something familiar...new! ~KD

Kaedee here to review. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I loved the voice for this piece, which keeps the reader interested. In my opinion, the voice is one ...

Plot questions? Check the first chapter, it's all explained in comments below. Review! Thanks- KD _________________________________________________________________________________ It was Jessa’s bir

Hey, it would be nice if you could give an overall impression of my short piece called Rosalie. It's Other Fiction. Thanks a bunch- KD

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Haha...when I was reading the story, Madonna's Four Minutes was playing through my head. :D

I loved it too. I admit though, I was drawn to the book for more of its cover (which has a giant rubber duck, if I remember correctly) than what ...

Hey, nice to meet you! :) I love emoticons too. Okey-dokey, here's my question: Are you an only child? ~KD

I love it! Throwing open the door to the McDonalds I paused and turned to the neon arches that led me to this oasis in the midst of concrete traffic ...

Hey Danni. Yes, resize...this is beautiful! I love how the colors go from an orange, gets lighter, then fades into a blue. The sunrise reflecting on the water is also ...

Hey, Kaedee here again! I have only one critique: She looks a little more mature than she should be, because of her face, which should be much wider. Besides that, ...

Hey, Ballerina. :D I guess it's safe to say Rowling is my favorite writer, since I love her books. Hmmm...I don't quite have a fav band! I never really like ...

This looks great in black 'n white...I love how dark the frame is, which adds a nice effect. Nice job! Yes, resizing this would make your work much easier to ...