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Kaedee

  • Randomosity Re: Random Youtube Videos

    'Kay...here's another funny one. Our Wonderful Nature (Animation)

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever.

    Hey Esther. It's KD, here to review your piece today! This was cute, fun, and entertaining. A classic matchmaking story between nobles! (Well sometimes, it turns out differently than that.) ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two)

    Sorry, I have no critiques for you. (Well, except for the one that Knightley pointed out.) Because... Wow! This was great! :D This totally deserves to be featured. I'm glad ...

    Apr 6, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: New Student

    Hello Naydy, welcome to YWS. I'm KD, and I'll be reviewing your story today. Here are my nitpicks for first third of your story. I was late for school. I ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Girl Portrait (Focusing on Hair)

    Thanks for the great reviews! Hadn't noticed these things before. Wow, now that I really think about it, yes, the left eye is much too far away from the nose. ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Comprehend/ Unfamiliar/Google Ad

    *Likes* I loved the first one. The colors. The streaks of paint, the splatters of paint, the patterns. I loved all of it, especially how you left a gap of ...

    Apr 4, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Spring In Kentucky

    You live in a beautiful place, Quetseli, that's for sure! My fav: First picture. It's simple, yet, I like it! Least fav: Second one. Too many things are in the ...

    Apr 4, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Lava's Volcano [Active]

    Hey! Could you critique my artwork? It's a portrait, mainly focused on the girl's hair. Thanks, Lava. ~KD (Love it...'Lava's Volcano'...:) ) Btw, my artwork is resized.

    Apr 4, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Classy's Sketch Collection (new -couple- drawing)

    KD here to critique the latest couple sketch! Pros: -The positions look very realistic. Nice job. -Also, great job with the proportions! -You did basically all the shapes (legs, arms, ...

    Apr 4, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Girl Portrait (Focusing on Hair)

    Haha, thanks guys! I'm not sure which color of hair is better, though. :wink: I don't know...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Girl Portrait (Focusing on Hair)

    This is mostly about the girl's hair. My sketch looks much worse when put through a scanner and onto a computer than in just natural light! I could see all ...

    Apr 3, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Goosebumps fan-fiction: Night at Murder Mansion, part 1

    I'm sure your brother loved this! At least I did. Even though it is simple, I found this an entertaining read for everyone, not just for a younger audience. I ...

    Mar 31, 2010
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Goosebumps fan-fiction: Night at Murder Mansion, part 1

    Shubhi means the age ratings: Everyone (G), 12+ (PG), 16+ (PG-13), & 18+ (R). When you submit/edit your work, the rating choice is right underneath the place where you insert ...

    Mar 29, 2010
  • Randomosity Re: Sometimes 11 year olds really are more mature...

    Lol... :D

    Mar 29, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Neon Rain- Prologue

    Hey, Kaedee here to review! Welcome to YWS. The title was interesting, different. It drew me into this prologue. The beginning is also great, because it also, well, draws the ...

    Mar 29, 2010


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