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Re: Goodbye, Ryan: My First Love
Hey PandyBear, I'm KD and I'll be your reviewer today! You did a great job with this. Nitpicks: “Sam what’s wrong?” he looks at me with question marks in his ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Perfect Angel - Prologue and part of Chapter One
Hey, KD here to review. First off, welcome to YWS. I love the prologue. The simplicity of it makes it so interesting. And it makes you think. What can flowers ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: My Funny LIttle Haiku
Cute! I wish I could critique this, but I don't know really how to. So, that's all I have to say. Keep on writing...haikus? ~KD
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Rain, Summer,and Ice Cream: Chapter One
Lol, no problem! Any time. :D
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: The day YWS stood still.
Cute. :D Awesome idea, it's time that someone turned the YWS road trip idea into a story. The only way to make this awesome story awesomer is to add me ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [5]
Banned for having the same number of 'a's and 'e's in your banning sentence.
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Whispers ..... Chapter 1
Hey I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today. Today I'm just going to do an overall review for this. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -The dream. It's ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Two ~ Part two)
Hey Skins! I'm back to review part two of the latest chapter. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I like how you don't state exactly what happened until the ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption Chapter 1 - Rewritten Once More!
KD here to review! In here you have great imagery, that's the thing I can applaud you the most for. Nitpicks: even though the sound of their tin boots and ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Sins - Help Wanted!
Very creative idea dashka, love it! Yes, you need to make all of these more unique to each other. I'll review each one. Envy- Perfect. Wrath- I feel as if ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: KD's Color Edited Photos
Thanks for the suggestions and feedback...hmmm, for the top one, maybe I'll try playing around with the reflection more. (I updated all the photos with the photo editing process I ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.3 (review!)
Esther! I'm glad you put up chapter three quickly. There seem to be ongoing tense problems in here. That's my biggest correction for you. Otherwise, overall, good job. By the ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Rain, Summer,and Ice Cream: Chapter One
Aghhh!!! It's a reviewer's nightmare to come across a piece like this with one block of text (as the others already pointed out). Please fix soon, 'kay? :wink: But even ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Weird Art
Weird indeed! :) I shall review this. My favorite thing about this piece is the eye on the right, and how you put not only the eye to a slant, ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: KD's Color Edited Photos
Thanks guys! @ Mizzle: All images from Flickr: the 'interesting photos' category, o' course! I cannot say exactly who took them, but...
Apr 9, 2010