Kaedee

Love this! The colors are nice. Cool idea here. Good job on the textures and shadows. My fav figures in here is the guy on the far right and the ...

Hey, KD here to review. I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, but, er, I'll give this a shot. I think you had a strong start, but I started to ...

Hey burnt_marshmallows, KD here to review! Very...mysterious. Here's one thing that is a bit odd: then the sun could close its eye and rest Maybe the moon would shine brighter ...

Wow, this is great for MS Paint! Amazing! Even more amazing if you just used a mouse to draw this (did you?). Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -The ...

Hey crescent, KD here to review. I clenched it too tight, causing the thorns to cut into my hand. To make it more dramatic, I would say: 'I clenched it ...

KD here to review chapter six! I'll start straight off with the nitpicks. Nitpicks: His back ached horribly, but other than that he was alive and breathing. I think that ...

Awesome! :D I knew this was going to be featured as soon as I saw this. They lyrics are hilarious, and they all fit perfectly with the song. Where do ...

Hey tam_ara, KD here to review! Nice! I like it. Here's my only critique: It seems like you want to make it seem like the girl's head is turned a ...

I looked out the passenger window to see him standing on the side of the road, hand out, thumb up. He was soaking. Jaw clenched, I turned up the radio ...

Hey Esther! I read the last chapter and this one. They were both great. Had either one known what would happen at dinner, the two might have just retreated to ...

I turned on the computer, and the sudden recollection of myself already checking my email triggered the action of myself turning the computer back off.

Hey helover, I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today! Ooh, good idea. Here are your main problems: You state too obvious things. Also, there are better, more touching ways ...

Hey Shadow, loved this! Welcome to YWS by the way, and I'm Kaedee. Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -I loved how you introduced your story. -Great ending! -I ...

I think I might have an idea! :D ...for Covetousness- maybe put a look of longing on her face? Make her look like she's looking at something, tilt her head. ...

Hey Smexay, KD here! I found this nice and sweet. But I have a question: Is it only for them? Because if the answer is yes, then I think this ...