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Re: Lost Love; First Love
Hiya, KD here to review! Welcome to YWS, by the way. :) Nitpicks: Cross outs, inserted words, added words...corrections in bold. When I was a little girl, I used to ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Duet: Just One Dance Please?
Haha, this was great! Good rhythm. Girl:Besides, boy, I'm outta your league! Guy: Oh, girl, just one dance please? Lol, this is going to be stuck in my head for ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: First Attempt... (New Image)
Hey fries, I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today! Pros: -Hair. You totally conquered anime hair here! -Texture/wrinkles in his clothes. -You did a good job with the shading ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Coffee Break (a Poker Face by Lady Gaga parody)
Wow, you put a lot of work into your vids too! Nice job with them. Loved your facial expressions. :lol:
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: The Day he Hung Up
Hey Isha, it's KD! And obviously, I'm here to review. Nitpick Time! I will replace, insert, and cross out words/punctuation in bold. “The one and only. Are you somewhere where ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Mirrors
Hey, jasmine. KD here to review! Nitpicks: You finish looking at the bland padded around her and look to her face. What? I don't understand. 'The bland padded around her'? ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Second Chances
That helped a lot. Thank you thank you thank you! Edited.
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Weird MS Paint picture
Nice colors! Yes...it's kinda hard to see the face. Perhaps make the colors bordering the face a bit different? ~KD
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: My sketchbook
Hey shubhi, KD here to review your art. 1. Stronger lines would help a lot. (Picture Below) Circled in orange- See? The black lines don't connect here. 2. I liked ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Second Chances
Thanks for the review! :) “I’m doing you a favor, it’s not the other way around, I only let you in because I pitied you, and I should have just ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: It's Embee!
Hey. :D I'm KD, welcome to YWS! I'm pretty sure that you'll like it here. I have some questions for ya... 1. What's your favorite book? 2. Least favorite book ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Kurenai
Wow...I've seen all your other versions of this girl, and you've improved SO much! Hair - 9.5/10 Very nice. I love the crisscross strands of hair on her forehead, and ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: A Tree and a Rock, don't I sound in-ter-esting?
Hey Jenthura, this is KD, here to review! You did a very good job with this. I love the branches and the markings on the rocks. I think this piece ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Second Chances
Thanks for the feedback, guys! did you ever write before this? Lol...yes I have? :D
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Hey, can you review my short story? It's romantic fiction. Second Chances- :D Take your time. Thanks- KD
Apr 25, 2010