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Hi, Words! I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today. Wee woo wee woo wee woo P.J . ran around the living room making firetruck noises, drowning out the sound ...

Hey jolene, what's up? :) I'm KD, and I'll be your reviewer today! Not bad. Here's a nitpick critique for you: Watch your tenses! You switched from past to present ...

Hey Wing, KD here to review! Things I Like/Things You Did Well On: -Good beginning. - “Why are you so stupid?” Unable to resist the urge, I take a glance ...

Hey Kat, KD here to review! Wow, this is really cool. The only problem here, is that I my eye gets pulled to places all over the photograph, but not ...

Hi, I'm KD, an' I'll be your reviewer today! Welcome to the site. I loved this. Wow, so true! This was cute, simple, and very well thought out. Don't have ...

Hey, KD here. Erm, I don't understand! This is confusing. Is this: My name is Cait McGowan. I don't really understand why I'm doing this yet. Anger can make my ...

Confused

Hey, KD here to review, seeing you had none. :( Nitpicks: “I swear that if it was not true I will give up my throne,” he said. This sentence is ...

Hey Chal, KD here again. Grr. This laptop is horrible. It's messing up all my reviews. Well, anyways... Nitpicks: He was about to bite into his fine piece of toast ...

Nice to meet you! The name's KD. Welcome to the site. I'll review your first chapter paragraph by paragraph, if that's alright with you. My body was getting heavier with ...

KD here to review! Pros- -Hair. Is. Awesome. :D -Great job on eyes. You gave them great expression. Overall the faces are well done too. -I like the shading you ...

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Choco. cake! With some raspberries, hehe... :D