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Oops...lol, sorry I didn't answer you earlier! Yes, every time you start a new story, or add a new chapter to your story, make a whole new post in the ...

Hey Cindy, welcome to the site! This is KD here, ready to review. Okay. This was...okay! This prologue doesn't make me want to immediately start reading chapter one of your ...

KD is here to review! Nitpicks: She plucked it from his hand s gingerly, slowly, and with great care not to disrupt the life in his hands. He smiled chivalrously. ...

Hey, Ras! KD here to review...how about...the second picture? Not bad, not bad. :wink: But the first one is way better. The leaf looks fake, and pops out at you. ...

Hey, faded. KD here to review! 1st: Wow. I love how you captured the depth of the pond perfectly. I love the mountains(?) in the background, and how the right ...

Hiya Jorge, KD here again! In this piece, I think you earn a gold medal for creativity, lol, because of this sentence! the earth commited committed suicide when he stepped ...

Thanks Mystic! Haha...yes...her face definitely does need some work.

Grilled cheese sandwich! That's why my fingers are so greasy...

Hiya DreamWriter, KD here to review! I closed my eyes. This was it. I reached my goal. I made it to the track finals and I was going to win. ...

Wow! Great picture to color splash! The crystal's color is really intense, isn't it? Yes, toning the color down would help a lot. Also the white on the bottom left ...

Ras! Awesome art! I love your style, and your handwriting suits your art style nicely. My favorite cartoon is the rabbit one. What art tool did you use, may I ...

Hey Sara. I'm KD. Welcome to the site! *waves* Lol, I used to have a huge, beige, chihuahua. :( I miss it. I also love fantasy fiction too. Here are ...

Thanks for the help, guys! I've learned soooo much from your comments. :) ~KD

Hm. This sounds decent, but what I think will make this story really interesting, is the world it takes place in, and the wolf characters, since the plot isn't exactly ...

Um, I would create another YWSish site? :D What would you do if you became the president? (If your country doesn't have a president, alter the question appropriately.)