Kaedee

Gas Station

This is awesome. The only thing, was, that you're missing the 'the'. *thinks* Haha, who cares! ^^ This looks perfect anyway. Great work, and I love the Star Wars font ...

Hiya, Lisa! I'm KD and I'll be reviewing your artwork today. Baby Silver: Very cute. You did an especially good job on his wings. The two things I spotted that ...

Hey bubblegum! Nice job. I love the girl's hair, and you did a good job with the kiss itself. I like how you made especially strong lines on the lips ...

Hey KitxKat, I'll try to review this since this has no reviews yet! One thing I cannot really critique you on is the format; I simply do not know how ...

I feel bad. This sounds like such a lovely photo, and I can't see it! :( Is this just me? Will review when/if it comes back.

In reply to comment of my comment: Wow! That's so cool! So, do you write in French? I wish I could write in two languages. (:

Hiya Lolryne/(a) French girl! ^^ Welcome to YWS! So, do you come from France? Are you just French? Or, even better, are you still living in France? Living in France ...

Hi, possible. You did a fairly good job on describing the man's face. I sat here, frozen, eyes glued on my screen for this whole part. Hm, maybe I would ...

Hi, Pritt! I'm KD. Welcome to the site. Kate Nash and Coldplay rock! I love Kate Nash for her Merry Happy song (dancing at discos, eatin' cheese on toast...yeah), and ...

Hiya, austenite! KD here to review. Overall, this was very nice. I especially like the dancer's personality/character, and her reactions to 'Lacrosse Boy'. I also actually found the short paragraph(s)

Hey Tim! Whoaaa...that's such an awesome name for a girl. Is it a fragment of a name? Your full name? Or just a nickname? Haha. Anyways, welcome to the site! ...

Hey bubblegum! I'm KD, and today I'll try my best to give you a quick review on your script! Okay. I thought this was cute. But, this being a script, ...

Hi darkangel. I'm KD. Today I'm gonna give you a little help on...*drumroll* ...Prepositions & Tenses! (Problems in red. Important corrections/things to point out in italics.) I found a lot ...

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