Kaedee

Hi Jash. Wow. You have a lovely voice! :D The lyrics are nice too, along with the melody. I wish I had more to say, but...when will you be posting ...

Hi Dragonette! Oh, I loved these books. :3 I'm glad that the main character in this fanfiction is a girl, to make things different. I think you did a good ...

Heeyy Erica! I'm this really a short story? Or will you turn this into a novel, and have this be the first chapter? This would be a fine first chapter ...

Hey Orion. Welcome to YWS! I'm Kaedee. Or just Kae. I'd love to see songs you write/have written. I love music. You're learning the guitar? Awesome. The only instrument I've ...

Hai Zoomie. Welcome back! I'm Kae, or Kaedee. Nice to meet you. I'm sorry you forgot your passwords. DD: But, it's great that you decided to make a new account ...

Hi Ranger! Overall, this was pretty well-written and touching. Adding the little girl into the story was great. Her actually being present, sitting next to her father made me really ...

Hiii! I don't remember seeing a neofacist 14 around here, but welcome back anyways! I'm Kae. Nice to meet you! -waves- Uhm, well...good luck with your new account! Get posting. ...

Well, this was an interesting take on Hansel and Gretel. :D Minor grammatical corrections/words you could consider adding on to your sentences in the quotes are in red. Specific sentences ...

Hi Loveless/Summer, I remember seeing you around here a bit ago. :D Welcome back to YWS! -Kae

Hello captain. Welcome to the site! I think you have a decent start here; I don't really have much to say, this being only a short prologue! The whole freezing ...

Hi Sion, Kae here for a really quick review. :P Well, you definitely did well making sure that the lion looked like Simba. Nice job. But, I wish that I ...

Heyhey. Kaedee here to review! Welcome to YWS :3 The main problem with this story, is that it's hard for the reader to understand what's going on in this piece. ...

Cutee :D It blends into the piano so well. I wish I could see its tail better. :c Is the kitty yours?

Don't all ninjas wear black?

Hi hoagie, it's me again. I think I had made the biggest mistake an investigator could make. I hadn’t known what I was getting myself into. What mistake, exactly? I'm ...