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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Girl Without Keys

    Hey! Wow, I quite like this. I love how...mysterious Ashley is. You did a great job with the characters, and the imagery of this piece. Overall this was very well ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Title: Why Not. Chapter 1: Just A Regular Day

    Yo, tigs. KD here to review! Let's start off first with formatting; I'll try not to repeat anything that anyone else said. I think this would be much nicer if ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread

    (Oh, it's too bad Art & Photo. doesn't count, 'cause I did a bunch already!) 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9! Woot! I feel gooood. We should ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: I don't know

    Drawers! I'm KD, here to review your piece today. Continue! Please continue...if you have an idea! I mean, I shouldn't actually be the judge of whether to continue or not ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Free Wanderer

    Hiya Sarah! First off, I think you did a nice job with the background, including the rock and its texture. Actually, you did pretty well with all of the textures ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: So, How Do You Feel About Rings? Golden Ones?

    Sorry I never thanked you guys for your reviews. ^^ @ Yuri: When I said that her fingers were spinning around calamari dishes, etc., I meant that she was deciding ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Rosalie (Short Piece)

    Oh...thanks so much for reading this! :D I'm glad you liked it.

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: me

    Hi pencil! Welcome to the site! I'm Kaedee. Or KD. Or Kae. Or Dee. I don't know. You can call me Bob, and I won't care. (But if you want ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Drawing of two horses

    Hey there, penguin! I'm Kaedee, and I'll be reviewing your horses today! (Doesn't that sound weird?) Okey-dokey. You did a fairly good job on the horses' hair and ears. I ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Tonight

    Hey ace! It's me, here to try to review your poem! ^^ I loved the nice flow to this poem. Turn on the lights in the lonely towns, Arouse the ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Rose

    Hey! Here to review now that the picture has shown up. (Sorry about being a bit late, too.) Yes, the colors are so pretty together. I kinda like the grainy ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Hers

    Yo, Zoray. (: Kaedee is here to review! Let me guess what you were trying to show the reader through this piece: Alexa is a girl who is bright and ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Uh...lady I guess...

    Hiya, sare! Kudos for using Adobe Illustrator! It generally takes a bit to puzzle out Adobe tools. I think you did a great job on her torso. I like the ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Dom and Kelsey: A(kinda) Emo Love Story

    Hi hugs. Welcome to YWS! jayleigh said, hardly anybody would want to read this/even try to read this. Break this whole thing into paragraphs...maybe even separate this into parts, since ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~

    Hey jasmine. I loved this! I think this idea has tons of promise; I think I've imagined something like this before in a dream or something. It was pretty scary... ...

    Jun 22, 2010


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