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Re: The Girl Without Keys
Hey! Wow, I quite like this. I love how...mysterious Ashley is. You did a great job with the characters, and the imagery of this piece. Overall this was very well ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Title: Why Not. Chapter 1: Just A Regular Day
Yo, tigs. KD here to review! Let's start off first with formatting; I'll try not to repeat anything that anyone else said. I think this would be much nicer if ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: The Review Day Check-In Thread
(Oh, it's too bad Art & Photo. doesn't count, 'cause I did a bunch already!) 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9! Woot! I feel gooood. We should ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: I don't know
Drawers! I'm KD, here to review your piece today. Continue! Please continue...if you have an idea! I mean, I shouldn't actually be the judge of whether to continue or not ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Free Wanderer
Hiya Sarah! First off, I think you did a nice job with the background, including the rock and its texture. Actually, you did pretty well with all of the textures ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: So, How Do You Feel About Rings? Golden Ones?
Sorry I never thanked you guys for your reviews. ^^ @ Yuri: When I said that her fingers were spinning around calamari dishes, etc., I meant that she was deciding ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Rosalie (Short Piece)
Oh...thanks so much for reading this! :D I'm glad you liked it.
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: me
Hi pencil! Welcome to the site! I'm Kaedee. Or KD. Or Kae. Or Dee. I don't know. You can call me Bob, and I won't care. (But if you want ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Drawing of two horses
Hey there, penguin! I'm Kaedee, and I'll be reviewing your horses today! (Doesn't that sound weird?) Okey-dokey. You did a fairly good job on the horses' hair and ears. I ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Tonight
Hey ace! It's me, here to try to review your poem! ^^ I loved the nice flow to this poem. Turn on the lights in the lonely towns, Arouse the ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Rose
Hey! Here to review now that the picture has shown up. (Sorry about being a bit late, too.) Yes, the colors are so pretty together. I kinda like the grainy ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Two Hers
Yo, Zoray. (: Kaedee is here to review! Let me guess what you were trying to show the reader through this piece: Alexa is a girl who is bright and ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Uh...lady I guess...
Hiya, sare! Kudos for using Adobe Illustrator! It generally takes a bit to puzzle out Adobe tools. I think you did a great job on her torso. I like the ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Dom and Kelsey: A(kinda) Emo Love Story
Hi hugs. Welcome to YWS! jayleigh said, hardly anybody would want to read this/even try to read this. Break this whole thing into paragraphs...maybe even separate this into parts, since ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~
Hey jasmine. I loved this! I think this idea has tons of promise; I think I've imagined something like this before in a dream or something. It was pretty scary... ...
Jun 22, 2010
