Kaedee

Hi, jolene! KD here to review. 1: Yup, definitely looks like Piplup ! Good job on the shading! I only wish you had stronger and more confident lines, since I ...

It's me here to review again, obviously! Here's the only critique I have for you. And it's really, really, small. had any idea why Mr. Dobsen’s class was so talented. ...

Hey. Sorry I took so long! I was traveling. (: Amelia shook her head. “No, it’s fine.” Shima looked at Amelia’s mother. “She’ll take it, Shima, thank you so much. ...

It's OK. *pats back* We are amazingly awesome. Haha, now it's neg 12. (Has anybody else noticed?)

WE. DID. IT. (And I'm the first to say it!) Haha, now we're going into the negative numbers according to the banner on the home page. Maybe now we can ...

KD here again! How's it goin'? I think that this story is progressing fairly well! I'm glad that you took the time to let the MC think about all the ...

Hey gabriella! This was all a bit confusing, right from the beginning, because of this little part. I never thought it would actually happen. I never imagined actually dying. But ...

Hi! KD here for a non-nitpick review! Hehe. This chapter lacks feeling the most out of everything. Feelings, and thoughts. What's going through the MC's head when her parents say ...

Hiya inkmind. Welcome to the site! I'm KD, and I'll be reviewing your work today. I'll try not to repeat anything ace said, haha! First, watch your tenses, and ellipses! ...

Hey, Shep. I really liked this. It was so sad, sweet, and touching. Great imagery; the beginning made me smile. I love how you were able to show so much ...

I love these, and I especially love the light in the first one. The color brightness is fine; but, I'm interested in seeing how the flower picture originally looked. Yea, ...

Hi Embee, KD here to review again. “Skinwalkers aren’t born, they’re made. Please, Papa, you have to find the cure for us,” she pleaded. Instead of asking her father to ...

Embee! 1: Wow, I actually really like this one, and how it's taken from inside a car. Futuristic indeed. (: 2: Cute, but the ballerina blends in too much with ...

Hey Mikey! I'm Kaedee. Isn't YWS awesome? Haha. Oh yeah...welcome to the site! Almost forgot to say that. I don't like swearing either. If I swear I just feel icky ...

Love this! I mean, I love both the crane and the photography, hehe. Great idea. I especially love the tiny crane shadow and the bigger pencil shadow, and how it ...