KJ

Ash, my corrections/opinions are in bold. I may sound brisk or critical, but I'm just in a hurry, so don't take it personal. Hope this helps. And by the way, ...

Again, newly edited. I hope you appreciate all this work I'm doing ;P

This was really good. I think the best thing was the way you made the eyes so realistic. Some things don't exactly match up to the picture - like his ...

Hey these were really neat. Loved the eyes. I thought the flower picture would have been better if they'd been larger, and closer to the camera.

They're pretty good... only thing I didn't like was how close-up they were. I would suggest some distance between the camera and the flower.

lol... I'm sorry. But I do like Twilight more. I can relate to Bella more than I can to Hadassah. Though don't get me wrong - I love them both ...

Well, nothing can beat Twilight :). But I myself liked Atretes more... call me crazy.

I don't have much time, but I just wanted to tell you that, regardless of it's rather short length, I liked it. Only thing I didn't like was the "BAM ...

If you're having trouble finding a book to read, I recommend these books! They're written by Francine Rivers. Note: They have many mature elements in them. Not graphic sex or ...

I've heard it was good from several people actually... but I looked at it at Barnes & Noble and it just didn't seem like m my type of book. Maybe ...

Ash - I want to read this, but I'm going to reread Chapter One again before going on (I kind of forgot everything that has happened already). So I'll get ...

Ash, I'll reread it, but print it out, OK? I hate staring at the computer screen for long periods of time, and this will take some time. So yeah, print ...

Thanks everyone for your great critiques. I really appreciate the help and the fact that you enjoyed it. And Samuel - that's really neat about your family history. I'd be ...

I found this interesting. What I liked most was the emotion emanating from it. I give you points for originality. However - and this can be both a good and ...

You should be proud of it. I really liked it. There were only two things I did not like and felt took away from the piece: The rest seemed like ...