KJ

WARNING to Luccy: I am going to be extremely nitpicky, considering I'm in the mood. So WATCH OUT! Chapter One Another tragic car crash was splashed across the headlines of ...

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Thanks for the reviews, guys. And the compliments :) Chap. 5 will probably be up tomorrow, if you're interested.

Okay, okay... I SKIMMED! Shut up, you know-it-all. So this was what I found. There were a few other things, but I was too lazy to do it all. Shut ...

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Mental note, KJ - get back to this. Ash, PM me if I forget?

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If you have time, I need a lot of help with this story: If you get around to it, I would appreciate it...

[ i]William[/i] How could she not think that I wouldn’t follow her? [This doesn't exactly make sense, since when we're in her point of view, she doesn't even seem to ...

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Wow, thanks you guys :oops: I'm glad I've finally written something that everyone seems to like. I'll take the - well, very few, which is a good thing I guess ...

Renesme (I know that's not how you spell it but I'm too lazy to go look) seems much more confident in the book. I mean, I know this is fanfiction, ...

Yes, the ending was unexpected. And yes, I too had to get used to it, and decide whether or not I liked it. But now I do. I'm the kind ...

Yes, that I did. I LOVED Prom Night. I wanted to write a different version, but along the same lines. Anyway, can't wait to see you tonight! Maybe we could ...

You seem so real as if you stand right before me This felt awkward to me. I would do something like this instead: You seem so real, as if you're ...