KJ

Hey KJ! :) I'm so glad you're posting more of this, because I read chapter one ... and, well, HAD to read the whole thing. Your style of writing is ...

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I've kind of vanished off the face of YWS, haven't I? Very sorry - life has caught up with me and has me relentlessly by the throat. Anyway, here's a ...

Chapter Three Alone for yet another night in my house, I tossed and turned in bed. I had trouble falling asleep. Outside my window, the trees’ bare branches cast strange, ...

Thanks :) And you said "almost" perfect imagery. What can I do to improve it?? Always looking for constuctive critisism!

I'm really plowing through this one. Maybe I'll actually finish it :) Anyway, thank you for the reviews on the first chapter. I hope you guys like this one, too, ...

Any title ideas, guys? This one just doesn't feel right. So this is my newest - don't worry, I'm still working on the others, I just needed a break - ...

I dreamed and waves crashed against the dark rocks. Foam glittered and landed on my cheek so cold. I saw a creature jeweled and fine crawling out of the water ...

Kidnapped by Wilma Sherrie Gourgues He locks the gate; I scream. No, this is not A dream. He stabs with all His might. My soul cries out In fright. The ...

Hi, it's me, KJ. It's been a while since we've talked, hasn't it? Anyway, I haven't been around in a while and when I popped in and saw this on ...

Just to jump right into it, your hook was very good, but formatted oddly. I think it would look beter as something like this: "‘ Reincarnation, literally ' to be ...

Thanks for the review, EmmaJane. A lot of good pointers. You're awesome!

I know I promised I would get to this. Sorry it took me so long. School's such a beast. Takes over my life and swallows me whole. Anyway, nitpicks first: ...

You don't want nitpicks, so I'll just plow right ahead and give you one blunt statement: You beginning needs work. You already know that, of course, so I'll give you ...

Wow, right? It's been about a year and a half since I wrote the first chapter for this story, and now of all times, I decided to come back to ...